falz3333's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Endeavour]

that was Fairly great

This deserves an 8 because it was nice. It was well done and thoughtful, creative and surprising. But none of these elements were TOO great. More time must be spent if you really want a ten. The scene with the hand futiley grabbing for the ice was especially nice. If the whole thing was done like that It would have been amazing. One more thing try to stay away from see-through characters. At least fill them in then turn down the alpha if you were actually going for the transparent look.

[Don't Worry, Son]

amazing..ly awesome!

wow. I loved the facia animations of the old dude. Did you intentionally make him look like the stereotypical god? And please! do continue the legacy! DO!!!!!

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!
i don't think that was intentional, i'm pretty sure he'd have to gel the sides to get them to spike like that. and that raises an important theological question: if god was real, would he need gel? would he let himself go bald??!!

[Alfred Gets Fixed]

Wow major improvement

This was a major improvement over your other flash. This one had really nice frame-by-frame animation and was a little bit funnier. I suggest next time make the frame rate a little higher and use less tweens.

[OLD MoBS EP1]

That was.....Different

Your artwork is like a combination of dragon quest and sponge bob square pants. SOooooo Strange. It was a great watch. Keep it up!

tacobuttfish responds:

hah hah, Thanks! Never thought of that comparison... But I like it! We'll keep it up fo' sure! Make sure you come back and check out Episode when it launches!

-Taco Buttfish.

[Harry The Harlequin Fetus]

L'hospital's rule

lim as x>infinity (f(x)/g(x))=lim as x>infinity (f'(x)/g'(x))

did I get it right?

[Apocalypse Please EP: 1 A]

That was a hill

I started off disinterested. Then I slowly became intrigued by your clever thoughts on the apocalypse. But after that......... ugh. You should really work on your writing skills. The scenes with actual people interacting seemed childish and not worth my time. And plus the whole squad thing and combat school. That reminded me a lot of Naruto. Just improve your art and read more books.

[Sketched - Last Requests]

you really should have animated

the break dancing. It was VERY noticeable when the camera never switched to the dancers and it just lingered on the guy.

sirjeffofshort responds:

I absolutely 100% agree with you. I think it is important for myself as an animator to know my limits however, and I know I would not be able to do a break dance scene justice so I decided to leave it up to the viewer's imagination.

I do learn more about the animation medium with every short we do, so hopefully in the future I will not have to make such cuts. I also hope to build a network with some of the great animators here on New Grounds that can help me with such things, so if anyone out there is interested in helping with a "Sketched" project, just give me the heads up.

[Sundays]

five frames

for a seal jumping into water? make it at least ten